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--- run_my_life [2013/08/14 13:30]
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 ## Advanced Persistent Assistant
-A network of sensors, artifical intelligence, and personally persuasive outputs collude to take advantage of a huge array of personal benefits that need dilligence, awareness, and persistence to engage in. Things a computer is very good at. This assistant is  subtly, persistently working toward an array of general life-improvement goals.
+A network of sensors, artifical intelligence, and persuasive outputs collude to take advantage of a huge array of personal benefits that need dilligence, awareness, and persistence to engage in. Things a computer can be very good at. This assistant is subtly, persistently working toward an array of general life-improvement goals.
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 Define life goals in specific results or in person value statements.
-example: Become a rock star.
+Example: Become a singer in a rock-n-roll band.
 ### Use Cases

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